People

People walking singly

People walking in a crowd

People saying nothing

People talking loud

People laughing, smiling

Grumpy people too

People who just hurry

And never look at you.

Author's Note

My 8yr niece wrote this today. She's walking in her Aunt's footstep. A 3rd poet in the family now, Kelsey. Doesn't that make you feel proud. I know I am proud of her.

Reviews

[CecilA]

Kelsey,

You have written a wonderful and insightful poem.

I love how you noticed how people act in public:

"People who just hurry
And never look at you."

I look forward to reading more of your poetry.

You have a wonderful Aunt Tarry and we are proud that you want to write just like her.

[Tarry Franck]

Oh my apologies. I can see now how it mislead you but this from my 8 yr old niece, Olivia. Sorry for the misunderstanding.

[Ashley G.]

Wow it's amazing that an eight year old wrote this. It's adorable! =3

[Tarry Franck]

Isn't it - I was blown away when she gave it to me. It's hanging on frig right now.

[Southern Cross]

Wise and talented beyond her years. Imagine have that much perception at such a young age.

[Tarry Franck]

I know - she's wonderful

[Ethale Captor]

An excellent write for someone of her age. This piece sounds better than some that I have read from more experienced writers.

[Tarry Franck]

Yea she's good already - Love it

[marie]

wow, she has some hidden talent in her, she's only 8? thats pretty good tell her i said good job:)

[Tarry Franck]

I most certainly will :)

[marie]

thanks:) she's very talented

[Tarry Franck]

thank you

[marie]

:)

[Ohhhwillow]

Omg I can't believe an 8 year old wrote this, that's impressive, good for her!

[Tarry Franck]

I know! I was so excited when she brought it to me :)))))

[Ohhhwillow]

Haha I can imagine, this is truly remarkable!

[Tarry Franck]

So true!

[Frieda P]

Smart little kid, tell her I said kudos.

[Tarry Franck]

Will do, thanks :)

[AlchemicPlutonian]

I love this. She's got talent.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Great job! Another great talented poet in the family.

[Tarry Franck]

She thanks you and so do I :)

[Lucien Maier]

That has an outstanding cadence. She did very well.

[Tarry Franck]

She thanks you and so do I :)