Unveil

Unveil

A Poem by Tarry Franck

Release your fears
Dry those tears
Show all the beauty within
As well as without
Extend a hand to another
To unveil the beauty of each other
Allow a smile
That's soon followed by laughter
Let them see
Within and without
You can be free
Beyond the veil.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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I like the description and the desire of the poem.
"As well as without
Extend a hand to another
To unveil the beauty of the each other
Allow a smile"
I like the strong ending to the excellent poem. Good to see what is hidden inside the veil.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote! Perfect timing ~~ I needed the smile. Thanks again.



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i love this poem! great write tarry

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

thank you so much tarry! you and kels are such a blessing to have :)
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

You are a blessing to us too dear :)
beautiful dreamer

11 Years Ago

awww thank you
great job, though i kind of think you could add more to it, feels a little unfinished

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
marie

11 Years Ago

no prob:)
amazing and inspirational.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
I love the beauty of compassion this tells us...


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
be real with me and i will be myself with you...very nice thought. too bad people exist under facades and umbrellas of mistrust and fear. this is what we are taught by the news media...from a young age. it is a nice thing to be able to reveal and have revealed to you those innermost feelings and our true natures. very good write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

thank you so much :)
I like the description and the desire of the poem.
"As well as without
Extend a hand to another
To unveil the beauty of the each other
Allow a smile"
I like the strong ending to the excellent poem. Good to see what is hidden inside the veil.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote! Perfect timing ~~ I needed the smile. Thanks again.
Ah yes... A fine way to say, "show me yours and I'll show you mine". ;-)
Just being light hearted...
Enjoyed the poem very much.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! :)
Love this one!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

My greatest pleasure! :)
Love this one, what's behind that veil of secrecy...that Phantom of a smile. You got to the guts of it with this short read. Nicely done, kudos!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you. That helps a lot - I was worried
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

No worries, great one!

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Added on January 13, 2013
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Tarry Franck

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