Rage of Tears

Place in to position

To wage: Teenage Mannerism

A common day affair

Some beg to differ

Weakness that grants

Us - Them

The power

It is - We - 

That makes - Us - stronger

Not what devours

Not what devours

A war on nerves

They seem to play

Five minutes alone

Taken day by day

Taken day by day

A common day affair

That turns into

A modern day warfare,

A jungle of lives

Tossed and mangled

Bruised and battered

Never seems to cease

Until a bullet from

"So called " peers

Enters our youth

Creating an endless

Rage of tears.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You put a lot into this poem. A young person life is hard today. Many choices and opportunity. Good and bad. Basic of life is good days and bad. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"A common day affair
That turns into
A modern day warfare,"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :) And yes I did put into this poem :)

[Ethale Captor]

An excellent write, absolutely well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Ethale Captor]

'Twas no problem.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Very well said.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

I think you did a fine job here. I will stop with that tonight.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[C.C. Marx]

Ahhh youth, we got it bad don't we? Some much backstabbing, hurtful words, and people just trying to play the social game. great piece

[Tarry Franck]

Love it :) Yet again but keeping them coming!

[C.C. Marx]

My reviews or hurtful words?? I sure hope you mean the former ;)

[teardrop]

really enjoyed your write, especially the last paragraph.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, good topic, I can see Eminem rapping this one! You just can't win with teens, your only revenge is when they have their own, and wage their own battles. Good old parental pfft! That stage definitely lasts too freaking long! Nice read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure.

[quinfinn]

being a teenager is a b***h, i remember. teenagers are ego driven, know it all, and terrified of peer pressure. they are exploited by every venue of society, think about that for a minute and marinade on it. they are a joy, a pain in the a*s and the future of our society...how much more pressure could they handle? this is a glorious write, Tarry

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

It is very hard on our young people as it was hard on us as teens. Teenagers can be so cruel. Well written Tarry.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much!!!

[rnuff]

there is alot of emotion through this write, very well written

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[That_Girl]

Love the repetition of those two lines at the end of the stanzas. (Second and third) One of my favorites from you, it's impeccable.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank so much :)