Golden Light

Golden Light

A Poem by Tarry Franck

I surround myself
With golden light
This lifts inner strength
One cannot fight
Not school girl games
Nor Satan flames
Nor in between can come
Between this golden light
My Goddess's fight
Evil spirits take flight.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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We all should learn to be a light in this world....beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

I agree, however I do have some dark moments that are out of my control at times.
Bring it on world! Yes! Stand tall and be a light.
Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
It makes me feel hopeful, nicely done

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you
C.C. Marx

12 Years Ago

Of course!!!
Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

:)
some of the best writing you have presented to me , ever. i think i enjoy this side of you most.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
can feel the emotions rage.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
the last line, feels a bit out of place. But maybe that is what you were going for. I love the vocabulary.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you
thank you for using the word Nor several times, reminded me of a friend i need to talk to! beautiful poem as always, you're such a wonderful writer Tarry.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
I absolutely love love love love this i can so picture this in my head wonderful job as always dear :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Lover Of Words

12 Years Ago

You are wonderful!
And it is my greatest pleasure :)

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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

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