Blind Beauty

Hey there my lady

Where have you been all my life

Hiding that voluptuous body

Those beautiful green eyes

Yet you were before me

All this time,

How could I have overlooked

What was right in front

The beauty you hold

I see such comfort,

I must have been

Dancing in the darkness

As you were shining

In such illuminating light,

Why didn't I ever see you

Through those darkened nights

Or notice when

You lit the morning dew,

I've waited many moons

To find someone

And here before me you stand

Now I feel, "Oh, so blessed"

Since you have taken my hand.

Reviews

[Lover Of Words]

This is a very beatuiful peice it is always takes a while too realize that you have someone you have been looking for so long knowing they have been in front of you for long is blinding and surprising all in one.. I find this peice trimendous! Its always good too know that you have somone too take your hand.... An amazing poem i have too say :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks dear :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome :)

[Laura Harrison]

This so such a beautiful piece. Nicely written :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Very beautiful...lovely writing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The good description lead the reader on a good journey to know real beauty and fall into a blessed love. Life is odd. The good people in life can be near and we are blind to their love and kindness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

I so agree - Glad you enjoyed the advice

[Leigh]

Voluptuous with green eyes sounds like a good combination to me, it is so easy to overlook what we have got and take it for granted. This poem has corrected that.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks

[Lucien Maier]

good piece good formatting.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[David Scott]

We do live "blind" so often.
I wnjoyed the expression.
I had issue with a few lines...
"Are notice when" Our notice maybe...
Also, the line "Now I feel oh so blessed" Needs something.... Like, Now I feel, "Oh, so blessed" Maybe that is bad advice... something felt off to me there.
Overall liked this though.

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks for the advice...made changes and it is much better. I can't thank you enough for the help.

[David Scott]

Well, I even spelled words wrong in my "advise" ha. I'm glad you found it helpful...
Feel free to ignor me any time! ha I will just keep saying what I think because it is all I have to say... ;-)

[Tarry Franck]

Wouldn't want anything less. ;)

[David Scott]

I do like it better BTW.
That's how it shall be then.

[Tarry Franck]

I do to thank you again for pointing that out. You're the best! You made it much better for me. ;)

[That_Girl]

Beautiful and intimate. Loved this.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - glad you enjoyed!

[Frieda P]

Utterly romantic. So often we can't see what's right in front of our faces. Sometimes we get lucky and our eyes are opened. Nicely pen'd.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[rnuff]

such a wonderful, beautiful write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Jordan's Back]

So beautiful and Romantic :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Jordan's Back]

Always