Farewell and Goodbye

Along the river edge

I sit after a long walk

Trying to comprehend what these voices have said

I ponder every thought,

Thoughts of another

Fill my head

I only want this one lover

To share my satin laced bed,

You know the one I speak of

I feel he is my destiny

He's the only one I love,

We are meant to be

I can't help but to believe

But if this love is not on my side

Then I will wish you the best of luck

Tell you farewell and goodbye.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

oh my, you touch me in places.... i haven't felt that kind ot touch in years. if you were not a part of my youth, then why does it sound so? i fear we have tread on familiar paths, although in different realities. this poem is going in my faves, simply because it feels like a part of me. thank you.

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - Kindred Souls - perhaps you and I. Thank you for the kind words and shelving this poem. You're reviews always mean a lot to me.

[Leigh]

This is a real heartbreaker, every line spells sorrow

[Tarry Franck]

Thanks ;)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Simply beautiful.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my friend

[Jordan's Back]

Wow Your writing is so mesmerizing at times.....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much!

[Jordan's Back]

Your very welcome

[Frieda P]

Adieu, parting is such sweet sorrow.

Nicely pen'd!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A very sad poem. All farewells and goodbyes leave us wishing for a better ending. I like the story in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

Sometimes the best gift we can give to ourselves and to those we love is the freedom of a sincere farewell!
A great poem!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[Lover Of Words]

I think i know whom this is dedicated too :) amd i love it such a bundle of emotions!!!! Well done wonderful woman of words!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much :)))))

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure Wonderful woman of words :))))

[Tarry Franck]

Awe that's sweet :)

[Lover Of Words]

Im sweet like sugar you should know that by now haha kidding :)

[Tarry Franck]

I know ---- that's the truth! :)

[Lover Of Words]

Haha hope you can handle it lol.... :) i do get sweeter :)) haha