Eternal Damnation

Eternal Damnation

A Poem by Tarry Franck

There was no moon
To move the clouds
To bring forth the thunder
To call forth the rain
Everything was asunder,
Whatever does she do
Without the energy
She's in need of
From the moon,
She falls prey
To the deities that tilt
Out of control
What comes around
Goes around
She feels she's losing her soul,
That's what happens when you dabble
With what you truly don't understand
You end up in eternal damnation
Within their unrelenting grasp.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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So often your writing gives pause to the looming picture that lies beneath. It captivates and is jarring in the same moment. 'Dabbling' can be a dangerous sport.

'You end up in eternal damnation
Within their unrelenting grasp.'

Okay, so that last line freaks me out.

Dark and foreboding. Good read.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much



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Such emotion in these words....gave me something to think about....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
So often your writing gives pause to the looming picture that lies beneath. It captivates and is jarring in the same moment. 'Dabbling' can be a dangerous sport.

'You end up in eternal damnation
Within their unrelenting grasp.'

Okay, so that last line freaks me out.

Dark and foreboding. Good read.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
You provide a good warning here. I enjoyed the poetic opinion. However, eternal damnation only comes from a conscious choice. Always in the darkest moments we have the clarity to choose... Just my opinion.
Enjoyed your poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Eerie and mysterious, Excellent work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Jordan's Back

11 Years Ago

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Pax
karma and fate takes its leap
for i guess you have played something that you dont fully understand yet...
Darkly written piece...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
i got a feeling someone played alone with the ouija board recently, careful what you summon forth when you play with things you don't understand. i love this write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

I'll have to explain to you one day through messages :)
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

as you wish, i'm here often
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

:)
Again i am in awe! You surely know how too make each and every write amazing.. this one is one of my many many favorites Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

1Your welcome :)
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank for helping me with it :)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

Its what I do :))) You are quite welcome Thanks for asking

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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

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