Elements and Emotionss
A Poem by
Tarry Franck
You must see
The sun
The clouds
The thunder...
So you can appreciate
The moon
The sky
The rain.
You must feel
The tears
The loss
The nightmares...
So you will appreciate
The laughter
The love
The dreams.
© 2013 Tarry Franck
Reviews
Loved the second stanza....
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you sooo much :)
the ying and yang explained very well
Posted 11 Years Ago
the ying and yang explained very well
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much
Every word in every line in every stanza spoke nothing but the pure simple truth, great job :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
Every word in every line in every stanza spoke nothing but the pure simple truth, great job :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you for such kind words
reminds me of an old family saying"light shines the brightest in the dark, hope is strongest in despair, and joy is more precious in pain" thank you for sharing this with us great write:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
reminds me of an old family saying"light shines the brightest in the dark, hope is strongest in despair, and joy is more precious in pain" thank you for sharing this with us great write:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
no prob its my pleasure:)
Simple and old fashion wisdom. Lifes greatest truths are found in these expressions. Thank you Tarry for the reminder that we are able to find joy because we knew sorrow.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Simple and old fashion wisdom. Lifes greatest truths are found in these expressions. Thank you Tarry for the reminder that we are able to find joy because we knew sorrow.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much
This is beautifully crafted, and so eloquent. It's potent in it's delivery yet in a subdued manner. I really love this.
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is beautifully crafted, and so eloquent. It's potent in it's delivery yet in a subdued manner. I really love this.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much :)
the ends justify the extremes with perfect balance. this is masterfully penned and well thought out, brilliant!
Posted 11 Years Ago
the ends justify the extremes with perfect balance. this is masterfully penned and well thought out, brilliant!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Wow - I wasn't expecting such good compliments on this one. Thank you so much for such kind words. .. read more Wow - I wasn't expecting such good compliments on this one. Thank you so much for such kind words. :)
11 Years Ago
well deserved....
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much :)
I love this! :) well done remarkable.. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I love this! :) well done remarkable.. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear :)
11 Years Ago
my greatest pleasure :)
Contrasts continually justifying themselves. Well done, Tarry.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Contrasts continually justifying themselves. Well done, Tarry.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
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Added on January 4, 2013
Last Updated on January 4, 2013
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Tarry Franck LA, United States Minor Outlying Islands
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