Elements and Emotionss

Elements and Emotionss

A Poem by Tarry Franck

You must see
The sun
The clouds
The thunder...
So you can appreciate
The moon
The sky 
The rain.

You must feel
The tears
The loss
The nightmares...
So you will appreciate
The laughter
The love
The dreams.

© 2013 Tarry Franck


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Loved the second stanza....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much :)
the ying and yang explained very well

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Every word in every line in every stanza spoke nothing but the pure simple truth, great job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for such kind words
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
reminds me of an old family saying"light shines the brightest in the dark, hope is strongest in despair, and joy is more precious in pain" thank you for sharing this with us great write:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
marie

11 Years Ago

no prob its my pleasure:)
Simple and old fashion wisdom. Lifes greatest truths are found in these expressions. Thank you Tarry for the reminder that we are able to find joy because we knew sorrow.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
This is beautifully crafted, and so eloquent. It's potent in it's delivery yet in a subdued manner. I really love this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
the ends justify the extremes with perfect balance. this is masterfully penned and well thought out, brilliant!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Wow - I wasn't expecting such good compliments on this one. Thank you so much for such kind words. .. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

well deserved....
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
I love this! :) well done remarkable.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

my greatest pleasure :)
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Contrasts continually justifying themselves. Well done, Tarry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Tarry Franck
Tarry Franck

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