One Last Wish

During all the Holiday celebrating

Your lost loved ones

Are still on your mind

Feeling so bad

That they've left you behind,

Even though you know that's not true

Doesn't help

From feeling so blue,

You feel the loss of them

And it's so shattering

Wanting to hold them

A wish causing maddening,

But it would be special

Just to have one more day

That extra gift you would love

But then you realize this wish

Will not end your way.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Wishing... I funny concepts,is it not? A wild creature will never wish or dream, but we can spend eternities stuck in wishes. Likewise, a wish can change the world forever when acted on or allowed to act upon us. When loved ones still fuel our dreams they are never lost to us.
Enjoyed the read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

I know how you feel. I have loved ones who've passed on and I still think of them especially at holidays. Great write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

I love this!!! Thanks for using the tittle i gave you :) but i know exactly how you feel

[Tarry Franck]

I know you do and I appreciate the help - we'll get through this together - no matter how long it takes.

[Lover Of Words]

Together we stand hand and hand and walk over the path were on and help each other in need on this long path we find our self on