One Last Wish

One Last Wish

A Poem by Tarry Franck

During all the Holiday celebrating
Your lost loved ones
Are still on your mind
Feeling so bad
That they've left you behind,
Even though you know that's not true
Doesn't help
From feeling so blue,
You feel the loss of them
And it's so shattering
Wanting to hold them
A wish causing maddening,
But it would be special
Just to have one more day
That extra gift you would love
But then you realize this wish
Will not end your way.

© 2012 Tarry Franck


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Wishing... I funny concepts,is it not? A wild creature will never wish or dream, but we can spend eternities stuck in wishes. Likewise, a wish can change the world forever when acted on or allowed to act upon us. When loved ones still fuel our dreams they are never lost to us.
Enjoyed the read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you



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This write for me is really relaxing,graceful,hhmm I wish I had a burger right now. Honestly I wish I could see my grandparents again......

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Awe - I wish I had many I've lost...maybe they would deliver a burger with them. ;)
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

hahaha,nice
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Things do not always go as we want them but then we are not the architects of life, only what occurs within our hearts and minds. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much
when ever i get down about my passed love ones my father always makes me laugh, because i can hear him from beyond the grave telling me to wish in one hand and s**t in the other to see which hand fills first. he is laughing his a*s off, somewhere out there! remember them as they would want you to, and that helps!!!! excellent write...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

That's hilarious! And yes I agree...need to cherish the good times and stop mourning. They would n.. read more
quinfinn

11 Years Ago

certainly not, remember....whenever you think of someone who has passed...your thoughts travel to th.. read more
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absolutely ..
there's no fun wishing for the same .. and God i can relate to that because this year i lost so much and so many precious ones that it only brings tears ... and my eyes already have started ..

that's all part of life
how well depicted ...
thank you for sharing ..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Sorry for your loss and didn't mean to make you cry. Thank you for such kind words.
The holidays bring about much sadness when one thinks about the loved ones that have passed. You feel left behind. You know that what your feeling isnt right, but you just can't help yourself. The loss you feel is crushing to your emotions and you just wish that you had just one more day then have to come to terms with the fact that it will never be. Beautiful Tarry

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear Neva
It is hard to let go. but the tie is never broken

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing and yes I do know the tie is never broken but doesn't stop from missing them.. read more
Wishing... I funny concepts,is it not? A wild creature will never wish or dream, but we can spend eternities stuck in wishes. Likewise, a wish can change the world forever when acted on or allowed to act upon us. When loved ones still fuel our dreams they are never lost to us.
Enjoyed the read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Some people live in your heart forever, their loss felt keenly on special days. Good write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Thank you
Nice job tarry I think aot of people can relate to spending holidays without loved ones. Its hard and makes it harder to make it through

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

I'm truly sorry for your loss, this my first year without my grandmother and I miss her but I know s.. read more
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

Sorry for you loss too. You're right they would want us to be happy and I know deep down inside he'.. read more
C.C. Marx

11 Years Ago

Exactly remember him as well and happy not when he was sick, its hard to move on and let go but as t.. read more
So sad to think another year without those we cherish so dearly. This speaks to me as I'm sure it does many others. Thanks for sharing it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

I know Frieda - I'm hoping it didn't cause you too much sadness. Thank you for being strong enough .. read more

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