Can't Wait

I can't wait to wrap my body

Around you completely

To feel that soft skin

Even if we have to park in an alley,

Can't wait for that moonlit night

To give into your love

Allowing you to take possession

From below to above,

Can't wait to kiss you

Feel that magnificent passion

As we hold each other ever so tightly

Sharing all the satisfactions,

Wanting this night to last a lifetime

It's going to be difficult

To say bye, but we'll see each other another time,

I do not doubt

But for now we have to let go

I can't wait to keep proving my love for you

That, you certainly know,

I can't wait to risk so much

You are risking the same

And in the end we will have shared

Our love aflame,

And you are worth it all

Like an exquisite necklace

That I wear proudly

Because suspended from it

Is you, my wondrous charm.

Reviews

[amarlaksh]

Good work Tarry !!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[A Soap Mess Stories]

All I can say is this is beautiful and so full of hope.

[tarryfranck97]

Thank you kindly :)

[Mia]

This absolutely beautiful...I especially like the ending. There is a lot of heart in this!!

[tarryfranck97]

Thank you so much

[DrD]

Passionate and romantic, the work is well formed and gets its message of love across strongly. An interesting read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much dear friend :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

It's going to be difficult
To say bye, but we'll see each other another time,.......most definitely. You are always a pleasure to read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for such kind words and you already know I love reading everything you write. You're a terrific writer and an inspiration. It means a lot to me when you stop by and read mine.

[quinfinn]

this gives both a classy love story and a gritty paperback romance novel at the same time....love it, love it, love it!

[Tarry Franck]

So glad you do! Gritty paperback - I like that. Thanks for the kind words dear friend :)

[quinfinn]

well earned!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :)

[quinfinn]

:)

[Frieda P]

It's mostly exquisite, except 'park in an alley' ruined it for me, kind of took away from the beauty of it, the rest is so romantic and fluid, that's just my humble opinion, otherwise nice read.

[Tarry Franck]

Can't explain that piece of it but if you knew the truth you would understand it better :)

[Frieda P]

oops, my bad, maybe that's the sexy part eh? lol

[Tarry Franck]

Just sometimes it has to be that way lol :)

[Frieda P]

oh I know that, just didn't flow within the poem for me, hey, sometimes those are the best of times! lol

[Tarry Franck]

That's alright lol

[David Scott]

We do often take possession of our lovers. This poetry felt like being lost and found all at once... A very nice poem and I could feel the love.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much for your kind words

[Lover Of Words]

This feels so real i can feel the emotion as i read this i love this so much!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for you kind words dear :)

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome I love this!!

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Lover Of Words]

:)))