I Miss

I miss that smile

Your humor that lights up a room

That sparkle in your eyes,

I miss those nightly tosses and turns

Sharing our love for one another

Our only concern,

I miss those nightly talks

JUST about our love

Hand in hand on those moonlit walks,

I miss those warm embraces

That you gave

I miss the comfort, the sensations,

I miss the scent of you

That personal essence

That only I knew,

I miss the flowers you would bring

To express your love

I miss the way you and only you

Could make my heart sing.

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

Filled with such beautiful sadness. There is much truth in the quote, "Better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all." In reading all that you once shared and embraced, I am reminded of just that. Although elusive, love can reappear at times you least expect it. I wish you much happiness and love in the upcoming years ahead.

[Jordan's Back]

This is adorably sweet and beautiful, a very pleasant read and quite enjoyable

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much :)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Hope you get these experiences back a thousand-fold...good write....

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much and I wish the same :)

[quinfinn]

we feel a person whom we love with all five senses and possibly even a sixth sense. therefore (and i have been to this place myself) when we are separated from that person, whether temporary or for keeps, we tend to recollect all those little things that are particular to only us...and it can hurt so deeply to miss those singularities. you have brought this phenom to light beautifully herein, well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for such kind words and glad you understand where I was coming from :)

[quinfinn]

completely....you are welcome

[Tarry Franck]

:)

[Damien Davison]

Very nice piece here, when you get thinking, you realize how much you actually miss... If only certain things were forever... Thank you for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

This is just lovely, and painful. Loss is never easy, but you are a master at making your feelings palpable. Beautifully written.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

We "miss" so many things and experiences... You seem to be taking about actually missing a person; a lover etc... My thoughts went to the why of it. Why do we live in this state of longing? Is it healthy to "miss"? Can we stop ourselves from being lost in this foggy lowland or should we even try. Can we choose to have all those things again; even now in our loss?
Thank you for stimulating my thoughts...
Be well.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for stimulating my thoughts. Wonderful questions - where do we find the answers? :)

[DrD]

Nostalgic and filled with the emotion that characterizes your works. Very well done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[C.C. Marx]

I can feel the longing, I know what's like to miss someone you've lost thanks for sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for reading :)

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasurr

[marie]

great job it really pulls at the heart strings :) grrrr smiley faces just don't cut it any more that was amazing if i could write like that i would be forever happy :)

[Tarry Franck]

Wow - thank you for such kindness :))))

[marie]

Hey truth is truth