Return Sunshine

A sullen day

I'm in a daze

Not sure why

But darker becomes the haze,

My emotions fall deep

In search for sunshine

But it's not in my life today

Can't wait for these feelings to subside,

Usually the darkness does not bother me

But today for some reason

I would rather this darkness

Enfold itself or leave,

I have a burning within

And the flames are burning blue

Which I can not comprehend,

Maybe a long walk in the woods

Is what I need

To clear my mind

It may do me some good,

I wonder where my feelings

Have taken a wrong turn

Bewildered I am

And the return of sunshine

I desperately yearn.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful write.

[tarryfranck97]

Thank you :)

[Mia]

Sunshine is all that is needed for the soul to feel less lost, less blue! Literally or figuratively sunshine warms you and it's difficult to not be content with life with it around. This is great Tarry, I thoroughly enjoyed it!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[quinfinn]

yes, i like your word choices throughout this engaging and deliberate piece. by the end of the write, you had me yearning for sunlight as well. nicely done!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you and hope you find sunlight soon too :)

[DrD]

Tarry, I notice a vast improvement in your word selection, conceptual themes and structure. This, in my opinion, is one of your best works to date.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for you kind words

[Coyote Poetry]

Some days are hard. Need reason and a purpose to move. A sunny day can bring hope and energy to a tire mind and heart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

I love this, I can relate to so many days feeling this way, you said it elegantly.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you! Wishing you better days :)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow this is AMAZING yet a feeling of loss but not complete loss Great work LOVE it

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

I see the darkness here. Not demonic or death... Just a lacking. A lost wandering in a quiet wooded land of dimming shadows. Exellent write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you!

[Damien Davison]

Every one has their bad days.. or weeks in a lot of cases lol. It was a very true and real poem, I did enjoy it. Thanks for sharing Tarry!

[Tarry Franck]

Yes we do. Thanks for taking the time to read. :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Emotional nice write! Thanks for sharing.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you