Forever Yours

You are the Sun

That lights my day

The Moon that

Lights my night

The Stars that twinkle

In my eyes

When I am down

You lift my spirit high

I can not imagine

Without you in my life,

Wherever I am

You seem to be

And for now

It's not all physically

But with that I am content

Because we share so much spiritually,

We are one, we find

From the depth of my heart

To the core of your soul

I am forever yours

And you forever mine.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

this is beautiful. if i may make one comment without sounding critical i think the line "i cannot imagine without you in my life" would flow better as something like "i cannot imagine a life without you" . maybe it's just the way i think though...this is a wonderful poem!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love the commitment here. Beautiful.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you dear friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem of love. Each line adding to the kind desire and need. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Becca Bishop]

Ok, this is - without a doubt - MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE poem by you. It's so like your other writings, but so different, too. I love it! Love love love love love love it! "I cannot imagine/without you in my life" seems to be missing a word after "imagine". It just doesn't sound that complete. Maybe something like: I cannot imagine love/without you in my life. Or something like that. Whatever, I don't know.
Great job!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[David Scott]

So kind and settled. A state of satisfied comfort. Most never find this or it just does not last forever. A tender write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[tk]

There is an outpouring emotion of love that is expressed in the very simplest of words. You crafted this well. Good job! :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[luviva]

wow, love it!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

I like this a lot, I particularly like the line 'i can not imagine, without you in my life'...says a lot to what that person adds to the relationship, nice read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Ahh my heart melts when i read this Love it :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Damien Davison]

I really liked it! It starts off really simple and gets a little more complicated, perfect representation of a relationship here! lol. Thanks for sharing!

[Tarry Franck]

thank you very much