An Extraordinary Love

After spending time with you

Made me realize the truth

How much more I love you,

I look at the pictures of us

So many times a day

Holding you, Kissing you

Embeds such a smile on my face,

A priceless moment

That has been long overdue

I know you are there and I am here

But I feel like with me

I took a piece of you,

I saw the man I married

And that made me want you more

It was us again

Together like before,

And like I told you

However long it takes

I will wait

For to me there is no man

That can take your place,

I have tried to move on

But we have an extraordinary love

My heart strings

Pull me back to you

That I just can't let go of,

And at the moment

Since I can't have you by my side

I promise 

Alone I will reside.

Reviews

[Hamza]

there is a tinge of every little emotion i know of in this ..
love, hate, denial, acceptance, aspiration, heartbreak ... everything ...
and sadly, the point that it finishes at is not accepting the fate and the will to hold on to what was beautiful at some stage ...
may be this is stubbornness .. but tell you what ... my life has stopped right there ..
frustrating yet true ...
great work ..

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Frieda P]

Extraordinary love merits an extraordinary poem, you've done that. Simply beautiful.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Becca Bishop]

This is so sweetly sad...I really don't know what else to say :) Good job!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[DrD]

Somewhere there's a lucky man deserving this write and I want to say with complete envy that it was a joy to read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much!

[Jordan's Back]

This is very beautiful and Very heart felt, Wonderful. and yet a bit bittersweet. Excellent

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much

[David Scott]

I see this poem as a profession of love but also as denial. It is heart warming and heart breaking at the same time. You cooked up a sweet n sour blend that was very palatable.
Thank you for this treat.
Be well.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

this is what's commonly known as true love. although most people never experience it, all of us are aware of it. you have captured the very essence of what love is in this charming write.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[Lover Of Words]

A great tribute to the man you love! Glad you wrote this! this is one of my favortie! :))))))) great job :)))))

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you my dear :))))

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure my lovely aunt of mine :)))))