Shine On

I crave your love so desperately

You're all I think of

Day in

Day out

It's with you

I don't want to live without,

You are the best I've ever had

Even though some moments

Were good and some bad,

But that's life

We had our ups, our downs

Please take my hand again

Let's reach for the sky

Let's cradle the ground,

Let's become one

Ride out on that elegant stallion

And allow our love

To shine within the sun.

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

Beautiful imagery!!!!!! Cue the applause :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Somehow you always seem to capture exactly how i feel...romantic and beautiful...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - seems we have some kinda of connection :)

[Damien Davison]

Short and beautiful, good job!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

i can only dream of this kind of love, but that's what beautiful poetry is all about, isn't it? this is a superbly pretty write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so very much :)))

[Becca Bishop]

Beautiful :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Lover Of Words]

AHHHHH i love this!!!!!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)))))

[Lover Of Words]

Your quite welcome

[Lost in Wonderland]

I loved this! so well put and I can relate

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem:)

[DrD]

Very graphic and well formed. An appeal and confession that combines into a delightful read.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you soo much