Beyond The End

I see your piercing eyes

From across a darkened room

Mesmerizing they are

Approachable maybe

But keep my distance for awhile,

Not sure if you recognize me

You are so familiar

Yet do you see,

Then I realize you finally do

For we are two old souls

Reaching out

For what we once knew,

We casually walk towards each other

And passionately embrace

Rekindling the love for one another,

We walk hand in hand

Leaving the room

To feel the crisp outdoor air

And fall into each other

Without a care,

Except for what is ours again

That our souls

Will always be connected

Beyond the end.

Reviews

[amarlaksh]

good write. Keep writing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you - and I intend to :)

[quinfinn]

i get a sense of two soulmates meeting for the first time in this life and i love it. an exquisite write!

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much.

[Hamza]

this is strangely antonymous to what usually happens...
they've just taken things too fast and the outcome is their reunion ...
quite fascinating and impressive ...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[luviva]

this is sooo good... nice write en thanxx 4 sharing

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[marie]

lovely reminds me of an old friendship i have :) i know this is supposed to be for soul-mates, but that is what it reminds me of.....what can i say?

[Tarry Franck]

Soul mates are not just lovers - they can be friends as well. It's someone that challenges you and also someone that can love you through anything after many years. I'm glad you liked it.

[marie]

ah ok that makes sense thanks for clearing that up....now i feel really stupid..... oh well learn something new every day :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A different and sensual piece on soul mates and love. Nicely done.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you so much

[A Soap Mess Stories]

lovely piece...so romantic...sounds like you, too are writing about my life...

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the kind words. Glad to know I'm able to reach out and touch someone with the written word. I will be on later and read some more of yours. Looking forward to it.

[DrD]

Highly sensitive and graphically offered. The form is very good and the imagry much better than some of your earlier works. This was a good read indeed.

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you for the kindness.

[C.C. Marx]

beautiful job, I really like this one Tarry :)

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you C.C.

[Lover Of Words]

This got to be one of your best ones. i know who this is about. so each you used make the poem remarkable. Chills down my arm as I read this GREAT JOB

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you very much.

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure