Save Me Now

Just something I'm experiencing at the time. The way I feel someone feels about me.

I know where you're coming from

I know where you've been

I'm following behind

And you have no clue

I'm coming for you,

You will not hear

When I approach

With dark silent wings

I will take you away

Far yet near,

To a remote place

Where we can hide

Even though it's against your wishes

You will have no choice but to abide,

You will be cared for

And want for nothing

Except to be free

Free of me,

But that's something you will not find

Forever I must have you as mine.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us wanted to be locked in someone special. The person kept us at a distance.
"You will be cared for
And want for nothing
Except to be free
Free of me,"
Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

lovely...loved the last line...."forever I must have you as mine...."

[Pax]

i find this really sad....love always have a choice... a very nice write my friend..

[Lover Of Words]

This one is one of the best ones yet i love this one so much. A very heartfelt write this was very emotional. Nice Write big fan