Etched

The rhythm of your heart beat

Against my ear

At times, I fear

That again, I will never hear,

When I would place my head

Upon your chest

You held me so gently

But I fear, there again, I'll never rest,

I yet can't help but doubt

And can't seem to move past

Our precious and passionate love

You and the memories

Are all I think of,

But if I were to pass away today

No sure how you would be able to part

And deal with the loss of me

Baby, when it is my time

Please look closely

For you will find your name

Etched within and upon my heart.

Reviews

[Caradoc]

This is a beautiful poem and I find myself sometimes thinking thoughts that echo your words herein. I drift within such memories as I dream and oftentimes, wish for them to never end. Oh if only such things could last forever.

Thank you for sharing this piece.

Well done.

-Caradoc

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem and memory.
"Baby, when it is my time
Please look closely
For you will find your name
Etched within and upon my heart."
The above lines are amazing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Love the first line and the last this wholw poem is beyond amazing nicely done

[Tarry Franck]

Thank you

[Lover Of Words]

Your quite welcome :)

[Lover Of Words]

[MOON]

Heartfelt write about love and loss.find my name etched in your heart.

[Damien Davison]

Very sweet and touching.

"Baby, when it is my time
Please look closely
For you will find your name
Etched within and upon my heart."

Beautiful, nicely done.