When a dead girls poem is bad

not a real experience. just so you know but i was typing and this came out...yea

What do you think of this dead girls poem?

The question asked of me,

I think “It’s bad, what do I say?”

I say “it’s sincere? - and sad...”

“and?” again,

I think “what to say!”

I say “and…it’s passionate?”

I’m told “she wrote it before she killed herself”

I think “is that supposed to make it good?”

I say “oh”

I feel really sad.

What do you say when a dead girls poem is bad?

Author's Note

ignore grammar. is it to morbid?

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

noo not morbid at all.
in fact, and I hope it's not horrible to say, I almost found it funny.
just the whole "oh snap, what do I say now.. uuuummmmm...."
struck my funny bone.. x]
the only thing about it was all the quotes. I couldn't figure out if the person was thinking or speaking at the time.
other than that, it was excellent. :]

- hershey's kiss

[Gabriella]

No, it's certainly not too morbid - it's real! This is extremely insightful into politeness and human nature. People are afraid to say things against the recently deceased, even if it's not personal. You capture those feelings very well here. The only thing that I didn't like about this poem is that most of the lines start with "I" and it doesn't look right to me. I'm not sure what I'd do about it personally... maybe add "So" or "And" in front of them. Good job here, really great read.