Typing Peacfully

a poem about the things i think about when i'm typing random poems or just to get thoughts out of my head.

Typing peacefully, releasing.

Letting out all emotions

Not thinking a thing.

Yet thinking everything through

Thinking about who?

Why of course thinking of you

The one who hurt me

The one who saved me, loved me,

Broke me, and built me up

Now what to do.

Help you, love you, hate you,

FORGET HIM! FORGIVE HIM!

Typing to let this all go.

Typing to help me know

Know what to do.

Typing peacefully, releasing…

Author's Note

ignore grammar. is this to random?

Reviews

[hershey's kiss]

I liked this very much. :]
interesting how many different things you could want for a person.
everyone's felt something like it at some point.
I like how you just simply put what you meant, no flowy words or metaphors.
just plain and simple, but powerful.

- hershey's kiss

[Stephanie]

Sometimes it's the best thing in the world to be random! And I didn't think this was random at all. I thought it was great. I really love the flow of the whole piece. It's really an inside look on one of your own personal traits- typing to get things out. I do it too. I loved it :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

its ok to be random.....its how we type. we release whatevers on our minds. its like a painting.....just paint what u feel then observe later. great job :D