Yummy candy

a silly poem really but it was fun to write :D

Yummy candy,

 

                     I pop it in my mouth.

 

Yummy candy,

 

                       It makes my eyes pop out.

 

Yummy candy,

 

                     Now I can’t see you.

 

Yummy candy,

 

                    A blow pop that you chew.

 

 

yummy candy,

 

                    I saw you in the store.

 

Yummy candy,

 

                    I don’t see you anymore.

 

Yummy candy,

 

                      I used to see you all over the place.

 

Yummy candy,

 

                     Why did you blow up in my face?

 

Yummy candy

 

                    Why did Willy Wonka think of you?

 

Yummy candy,

 

                     A blow pop that actually blew?

 

Yummy candy,

 

                     I had to taste.

 

Yummy candy,

 

 

                     Blew up in my face!

 

yummy candy,

 

 

                      I don't know why i still buy it.

 

yummy candy,

 

                    Do you dare to try it?

 

 

Author's Note

ignore grammer. it's just a cute poem. do you like it? does it work?

Reviews

[M. Amphet Salt]

LOL, I am still trying to figure out the context of this poem. It is original indeed, but my question is what is the theme? Lust, Anger, Temptation, Sex, Compulsion, or just Candy??? I took so many things from this short poem. I like it, but its so open it can be applied to anything really in my opionion. I would like to hear the Author's take?

[jumbie's #1 fan]

this is really cute and random. definitely an original. great job