i had a dream

it's kinda wierd to read but if you get used to it i hope you like it

so I had this dream last night,
               and no you weren't in it.
                          but you were pretty darn close.

and in this dream you didn't save me,
       but someone who looked like you did.
                  and in this dream you weren't the one who kissed me
                           but they sure felt like your lips.

and in this dream you didn't talk to me,
         but it sure sounded like your voice.
              and in this dream you weren't the one who hugged me.
                   but it sure smelled like your colane.

and in this dream, that you weren't in,
          i think you saw me, but i didn't see you.
                      

and maybe, just maybe tomorrow...
            you'll be in my dreams.

Author's Note

ignore grammer, does this read well?

Reviews

[James]

Haha, it reads well, but it's small and I'm partially blind 0.o
JK
I like this :D

[hershey's kiss]

aww that's sweet!
=}
[i'm such a pushover...]
i LIKED it though... i've felt like that a lot before. i mean, literally. 'tis nice!

[[untitled]]

I think it reads well, as well. I liked the "teasing" concept of " not you but, someone very like you". An interesting write.

[Lloyd]

Reads very well, liked this alot.