If i could draw you

a poem i wrote about my mom, i've always been distantly close to my mom...and this is my take on her...hope you like it...

If I could draw you,
I'd draw you with worry lines
on your forhead and laugh
lines by your mouth.

If I could draw you I'd draw you with
brown eyes, just brown
nothing more nothing less.

If I could draw you I'd draw you with
your arms folded and your nails biten.

If I could draw you I'd draw you with
grey hair, and age spots.

If I could draw you I'd draw you with
your work clothes on and a hair net.

If I could draw you I'd draw with
wonderfuly round cheeks,
and a pleasently plump figure.

If I could draw you it'd be the most
beautiful drawing ever drawn.

but I can't draw you so I think I'll simply
write a poem.

Author's Note

ignore grammer, and what do you think of the compasition?

Reviews

[James]

Expression of love through drawing :D
Through writing!
I love this
'Tis a lovely write

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

This is quite beautiful, and you have cleverly drawn a picture of your mom with your words. Thank you for sharing. Debileah