Heartbreak

Hey dont go.

I. cant. be alone no more,

Wishes pass but yours not gone,

Hey dont go hey dont go......

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

Short, but to the point..... I really like this and know just how you feel.

[HorrorMaster]

Very amazing poem

[Sunni Davis]

So sad but powerful even in its simplicity. Very nicely written.

[Ruth]

This is utter plea and the conciseness to this piece allows it to breathe! Actually hard hitting too......a pause needed afterwards and that is a good sign! lol xx

[DeadToTheWorld]

I love this...even though it's small..it reminded me of something I might say to someone If I to did not want them to leave...wonderful...

[Coyote Poetry]

I have beg a few time in my life. I understand the poem. A very good poem. Have fun and be safe.
Coyote

[Morning Star]

Don't need a lot of words to express how much you care
though is a short poem i felt the intense emotions
Beautiful work!

[al25]

Very effective. For some reason I really like this piece of writing.

[Lilly]

Short, simple - to the point - but the emotion of the situation is still clearly conveyed. Nice write.