A Kiss

long distance

Seems like forever since i had the right kiss
I know its out their, ill find her, my bliss

Been awhile, think i found her, but shes so far

That i'll just have to kiss her with love on a postcard

Reviews

[Richard Williams]

Love on a post card is sweet.

sweet.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great job! love the "love on a postcard" part!

spelling errors and word use problems (their/there, its/it's, ill/I'll, shes/she's).

[GTVile]

Ugh, been there. How inconvenient love can be. Familiar sentiments that most can relate to. Good job. I think you could have smoothed out the rhythm though, but that's just a personal preference. Other wise, I like the mood you establish.

[Liza]

long distance love is something i'm not familiar with but i admire the willingness to long for someone out of sight and out of touch

the only thing i would change is their to there

[A.Lee]

Very sweet. Nicely written :)

[Haifa]

nice and sweet

[Geralyn Miller]

Oh, I remember doing that! I perfected lipstick kisses on letters to the one I loved in Viet Nam. Long ago and far away.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Sweet...

[Roxi L]

This is short,sweet, and full of emotions. I love it
Roxi
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