A Kiss

long distance

Seems like forever since i had the right kiss
I know its out their, ill find her, my bliss

Been awhile, think i found her, but shes so far

That i'll just have to kiss her with love on a postcard

Reviews

[Sunni Davis]

Aww, so sweet with lonesome notes in the baclround.

[al25]

Great poem. Really love the whole idea.

[*skittlez*]

we all sometimes get cards more than post cards but this is a very good poem and vey sweet the last line made me think you know that sounds like me sometimes and it also made me go awwwwwwwww that is so cute

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime all we have are postcards and letters. A very good poem. Those missed kisses leave us hoping and wishing. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Emily Quinn]

very sweet, the last line made me "awwweeee...."
Short and sweet, but one thing "I know its out their" should be "I know it's out there" Other than that, loved this one
Take care

[Emily Quinn]

very sweet, the last line made me "awwweeee...."
Short and sweet, but one thing "I know its out their" should be "I know it's out there" Other than that, loved this one
Take care

[I.M. de Ville]

aw nice, haha. you should definitely put that in a song. i think it'd become a hit. or maybe send it to hallmark or something as an idea for an "i'm thinking of you" card or some other romantic type of genre they have. i think they'd really like it!

[Aggie Skeleton]

That was Valentine card sweet. I loved it.

[Havatara]

So many little errors in such a short piece..... The words were good, though.

[Mauricio Montoya]

all it takes is that kiss.
Nice work, well done.