T-SHIRTS

My friend bet me to write something in 2 mins. She said Tshirtss lol

Time flies by but only one keeps me comfortable,

Stuck to my body everyday shes gonna comfort ya,

Help not needed we are dangerous for each other,

Involved with the feelings that shes my only cover,

Remember the sight of her thrifty made body,

True to my words, when you get off im getting naugty,

Stop with the coldness my shirts the one whose got me

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[ju]

ha! i like that. love the last line.

[just rose.]

i really like the rhythm! well done!

[Poetic Beauty]

The imagery and the metaphor are wonderful for describing how someone completes you so much. this is done in a complete style all it's own and you should be proud for it is a creative and unique piece.

[.]

love the metaphor..sometimes went you don't think about and just write, you come out with something querky and cool, like this ...well done.

[Immortal1967]

lol, i love the frivilousness of this...actually very good for being written in 2 mins. good job

[Tony]

Andele'!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

LOL!~ fun take on it!~ well done!