KillerClown!!!

Idea by: Angela Cookie Monster Auten :)

My laughing so bitter,

The same goes for her glitter,

Adding the sprinkles to the flesh of her liver,

 

The trailer trash home,

My area zoned,

I look for the weak, the children alone,

 

Luring my smile,

The painted denial,

My colorful cover misleading the child,

 

Now leaving this town,

In pain and unsound,

On to the next comes this carniverous clown..

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

:o
I will never look at clowns in the way same way. Ever.

[Sara Mercury]

Someone once asked me what my first impression of a clown was. Was I fearful or did I laugh? It was the former, unfortunately, 'cos I had just seen that horror film bearing a similar title as your poem here, "Killer Clowns from Outer Space." Silly film, really, but it was a bit disturbing when you thought of children being fooled by these monstrosities. Very dark themes here. Well done. You got the point across, at least.

[Ladysue]

This was dark alright, but you wrote it so well...

[Maurice]

Very dark and chilling. Powerful writing.

[Adelia Alighieri]

This reminded me of the Joker in 'The Dark Knight'.
Very strongly written. Horri-fic? :P TERRIFIC! ;)

[Ruth]

Brrrrrrrrrrr lol
I really have a fear of clowns you know! lol They are so creepy! This piece of horror is excellent, disturbing love!
Great write
xx

[Cristal Bridges]

I love horror pieces. Horror happens to be my favorite genre and this is a very great delivery of that! I personally am not frightened of clowns but there are so many people who are and I think that this poem would definitely frighten them! Well done!

Oh wait I went to a haunted house once at Halloween where a guy dressed like a clown chased people around the parking lot with a chainsaw and scared the beejezus out of them by jumping in to their cars with them. :) I can still picture the fright on the people's faces. : }

[TeenRomance2]

Ooo Very dark and sinister! :-)

[KaySea]

very descriptive

[Brad]

there are two things that i hate in this world....
1. clowns
2. muppets

had you thrown a muppet into this work, i would have wet my shorts. i love this peice because it makes you wonder if she's the clown or the writer...?