KillerClown!!!

KillerClown!!!

A Poem by RTB
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Idea by: Angela Cookie Monster Auten :)

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My laughing so bitter,

The same goes for her glitter,

Adding the sprinkles to the flesh of her liver,

 

The trailer trash home,

My area zoned,

I look for the weak, the children alone,

 

Luring my smile,

The painted denial,

My colorful cover misleading the child,

 

Now leaving this town,

In pain and unsound,

On to the next comes this carniverous clown..

© 2010 RTB


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wow, aweosme dark writing! I love your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Luring my smile,

The painted denial,

My colorful cover misleading the child,

i really liked these lines very nicely written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, how to describe this in one word...
Creepy.
Very much so...but still enjoyable. Really takes me back to those terrifying dreams of killer clowns...O.o

Posted 14 Years Ago


clowns and the dark are my biggest fear. I find it interesting how this was written comically but creepy at the same time, playing on one's fears with comic relief.. Love it!
xoxo,
meg.
p.s.
i love the third line, i laughed out loud xD

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was really creepy but that's what made it so good. Keep up the good work =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a sinister and dark write! ...stay away with your evil clown.

great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very dark theme, yet I didn't feel scared by it (even though I am TERRIFIED of clowns).

Maybe it was because there weren't enough horrid descriptions for me to get a real feel of how scary this clown was or because I'm somewhat immune to horror since I write it myself, but I think if more descriptions were added such as the acts he commit or how he looks like might help a little. You did get your point across though!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good imagery, very scary

Posted 14 Years Ago


i don't like clowns....lol...i always had a fear of them growing up....good poem....

Posted 14 Years Ago


never cared for adults cavorting around in paints and polka dots~ creepy~ and after Gacey~ FORGET IT!~ this is as eerie as it gets~ well drawn taut atmosphere and curious dive into the mind of the painted carnivorous serial killer~ *shivers*

Posted 14 Years Ago



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