Limbo

Limbo

A Poem by RTB

I change my chant to an enlightend tone,

You see the smile, you are welcomed home,

 

I greet you near this delightful view,

Situational embrace of solid truths,

 

Happy to see you the delight is mine,

I'm shocked in aw when you walk right by,

 

I turn around and the picture is clear,

I'm still gone and your still not here..

© 2010 RTB


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Sometimes, the greatest distance lies between those we love. Neither here nor there and nowhere in between, it is the loneliest feeling of all. "Limbo" is succinct and to the point, with a bittersweet sadness between the lines.

Linda Marie

Posted 14 Years Ago


amazing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice write my friend...
a gorgeous-magnificence amorous-
sentimental flowing piece of poetry.
..I love it...

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is amazing, i like this. Love the last two lines.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The last two lines make the poem. Very nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was a beautiful yet sad love letter

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is awesome! I love this poem.. I really love the last two lines. Well done and greatly written.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the last two lines. I don't think the question mark belongs in the third stanza though, but that could just be me. Nice work :3

Posted 14 Years Ago


a descriptive moment of ghostly allure~ human emotion and ethereal fabric woven together on an elusive frame~ intriguing write~

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 26, 2010
Last Updated on July 27, 2010

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RTB
RTB

Cocoa, FL



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