Limbo

I change my chant to an enlightend tone,

You see the smile, you are welcomed home,

 

I greet you near this delightful view,

Situational embrace of solid truths,

 

Happy to see you the delight is mine,

I'm shocked in aw when you walk right by,

 

I turn around and the picture is clear,

I'm still gone and your still not here..

Reviews

[Ruth]

Oh yessss lol
Great ending!
I like the turn around a lot hon!
Left in a state of who knows what!
Awesome
xx

[Dave M. Pitman]

Happy to see you the delight is mine,
I'm shocked in aw when you walk right by,

These were my favorite lines! Great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

Limbo leave us alone and wanting. I like the beginning of your poem. But somehow you still can't be seen. The ending was perfect. The view of many is limited to what they want to see. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[heich]

so nice and beautifully written..

[Shin]

This was great!!! You must've took some time to write this one, I like the details, so deep, good job.

[Onyx_Rayne]

"I greet you near this delightful vew,
Situational embrace of solid truths," - I love those lines...

Of course, every line is perfect. You've captured the very essence of "Limbo".

Fantastic write, once again I'm completely impressed :)

[Nina Kari]

Ok I agree with Numb. The last stanza is wicked. I love this. You really captured Limbo well. Keep it up!

[Dream Weaver]

Great write my friend....

[Numb]

This was... amazing. I loved it! My favorite stanza - sadly - would have to be the last one. It grabbed at me, and I felt such emotion wrapped through the letters. This was very, very well written.
I, utterly, loved this.

~N~

[Martina]

wow this is amazing,
I like the first stanza and then the last stanza.
somehow I like these kind of poems. :)
this is very well written! :)
Well done! ^_^ i like it