Heavenly embrace

I see myself lift away from pain,

Into the light I stand now claimed,

What holds me now is calm and pure,

A place for me to endure no fear,

I see them all the ones I love,

Completed here I'm placed above,

I left behind the life of trials,

Moving now to my life of smiles,

Happiness is not what I feel,

Its far beyond the descriptive field,

I found myself this state of bliss,

I wait for you the one I miss,

Your times not yet so have no fear,

But in the end I can't wait to meet you here....

:)

Love and Live and greet God's gift

Reviews

[heich]

ohh..i love everything about it..its magical...

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

It's such a beautiful thing, to envision all of our loved ones waiting in heaven for our arrival. When the woes of this world have ended, may our hearts and souls be mended.

Linda Marie

[Gracie-San]

This was a nice work. It was very simple and very honest, yet it also has a great feeling joy and happiness when reading this piece.

Nice job. :)

[Amaunet]

wow that's all i can say. you've done a great job in crating this piece

[Iota]

it can't be described in words but the feeling must be amazing. I like the little things say here how this conquers fear and how it is a feeling beyond happiness I like that part of the poem especially. Nice work.

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"What holds me now is calm and pure,
A place for me to endure no fear"

...Wow--some great lines here!!!

"I wait for you the one I miss,
Your times not yet so have no fear,
But in the end I can't wait to meet you here...."

...i love this ending!!!...
Awesome poetry!!!
I love it!!!

james:-)