Stood up

Sitting I'm awaiting,

Do I leave I'm debating,

I'm tired of complaining,

A future road thats unpaven,

Now further contmplaiting,

Whether or not I am staying,

Hopeing she's delaying,

Maybe I'm too craving,

To her desirable enslaving,

The ring I bought with savings,

Cannot be described or have relating,

To any beauty I'm conveying,

Yet still I'm left unclaiming,

Days pass by she's still delaying,

Days pass by I'm still awaiting.........

Reviews

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{dude--we've all been there--great free flowing rhyme scheme my friend}

james:-)

[H-Jonesy]

Its amazing what love can make us do, like waiting till the ends of time for that one person.
A lovely little poem that speaks so much truth

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a bittersweet little love song from a steadfast heart~ well rhymed~