Blind Rage

The anger is seeping to the core of my soul,

No weakness subsiding my hatred unfolds,

Fist clenching teeth grinding the pain you deserve,

Your breathing annoyance heart stopping preffered,

My manner of speaking now slurring my thoughts,

Divding in essence the direction i've sought,

You tested my purpose and took to your own,

Taking my moment giving back as unknown,

I'm losing my focus my visions unclear,

The temptation is breaking to a point of impure,

I take it no longer my grief holds to hate,

I lose all control and decline to my fate........

Reviews

[Ruth]

Resigned!
I love the last part of this, an angry poem that bleeds well intoeach line!
Excellent!
xx

[Leanne Conway]

Wow, Nice poem! Anger in this was AmAzInG! =D Loved it!

[Dream Weaver]

Wow! I love me some angry writes and this one is Angry.
The flow was on as wellas the rhyming scheme. All in all
Great job brother, I enjoyed it.

[deeps]

I can sense the anger in this, it is well expressed.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice description of rage.

[HorrorMaster]

anger for this poem is amazing. Very good

[zombiikillah666]

oooo. i like it. (:
great work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Anger lead us to bad places. Deeds done in anger are hard to be forgotten. Rage when it comes can destroy families and leave you alone. A powerful poem. I could feel the anger and the upcoming rage in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[H-Jonesy]

This is a great example of how anger takes over us.

"The temptation is breaking to a point of impure,

I take it no longer my grief holds to hate,

I lose all control and decline to my fate........"

That, my friend, was a amazing way to end this poem. You are a wonderful writer, great job

[Middling]

Very honest poem