Two-Liner: Two

I'm losing all my blood,
But I don't care to tell how

Reviews

[D. Pesek]

This may seem wierd that I am about to go so in depth with my analysis, considering I have already written more than the poem itself. That's when you know you have some powerful writing, when so much can be written about so little. This poem seemed sad at first, considering one option for blood loss, that the blood-loser would wish to remain secret, would be cutting. but something about this poem, and possibly because I know you personally and don't see you as someone who would do that, tells me that this has a more significant meaning behind it. To me this poem seems to give off the vibe that blood could be a synonym for anger, maybe since when someone is angry all of the blood goes to their head? so maybe you are becoming at peace with something that once angered you? but you don't care to tell how it is that you are achieving this peace? I don't know, just a thought. as always, thanks for sharing man.

[heavvur]

i like this...but it's sad. at least the way i took it. i like it. it's succinct and blunt.