Carmen Triste

Carmen Triste

A Poem by d. c. smith

I've got a vendetta against the television and its colors

They stay all night long to join a family eating supper

They sing their sad song about the brave and young soldiers

"Look alive, gentlemen, for Death wants sturdy shoulders"

© 2009 d. c. smith


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this sounds familiar, worn and comforting. Also like Tyler Durden. Palahnuik would be proud, son.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The more I read this the more I have the feeling that there is more to it than just turning off the news while eating dinner. What is the meaning behind the Spanish-themed title?

Very well written, sir.

Btw I like the word vendetta, it works much better than fight or grudge.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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