Thoughts on a Robot

Oh, she wants me to forget

Cupcakes and the ingredients

But, oh, I'll never forget

Preaching civil disobedience

 

Oh, she wants me to cry

As she calls me at 8:15

But, oh, I'll never cry

I couldn't love her as much as it seemed

Reviews

[heavvur]

i really like this one.

i like that it rhymes...sort of. it's not perfect. and i like that about it. i like the repetition of the words forget and cry.

[wolfshrew]

if only it didnt end so quickly

[Nathan Noble]

a very creative write

[mae-mae<3]

This is pretty weird but screams out ORIGINAL!!!!!! Lol. Nicely done.