Recollect

Recollect

A Poem by Tanya
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This is a poem i wrote that pertains to the book i just finished.

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My eyes sweep the stage

For your majestic presence.

You can feel my piercing gaze.

You look around,

With those miserable eyes,

Desperate eyes.

I shudder.

Guilty for a fault that’s not mine;

Livid, for what I gave into.

Hot tears descend down my face,

Infuriating me into a crazed state.

Finally your eyes land on mine

But it’s too late for you to tell

That I’m gone with the wind,

Yet still present in your heart.

It’s sinister, what happened to us,

Though not our fault.

Blame finds no resting place.

Somehow, I want it to find one,

So it can bring peace to this heinous deal.

I can’t live with the sorrow

That loops around my heart.

I want to find a way

To forget

How it is to be with you.

 

© 2009 Tanya


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Tanya
if you can find a way to make it better, i'm open to knowing.

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I really like this

Posted 15 Years Ago


Your poem deserves to win.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Congrats on the win.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Such a heartbroken character. Great emotions in this, I love the way your worded it. Nice work!

-Howl

Posted 15 Years Ago


Congrats on your winning poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago


really nice. I feel so sorry for the person in this. What happened between them, to make them so unhappy, yet they know it wasn't their fault?


Posted 15 Years Ago


i really enjoyed this one, i can feel the pain that you are feeling...and i love your imagery♥
beautiful poem : )

Posted 15 Years Ago



Your poem demonstrates the conflict of emotions, twisting within, finding no place of completion.
It can be truly sinister.

Excellent word choice; your thoughts are well-described.

Nice work...

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 11, 2009

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Tanya
Tanya

Bentonville, AR



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I'm not really into talking about myself, but I guess I should now. I love writing, really, it's the only thing that really defines me. I love poetry, but I love Prose more. There's more room to work .. more..

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