the world is gone if you're gone

i had a dream last night and it was about the love i had for a person who dies.

the world is gone if you're gone.

 

I step into a different world than before.

A world where I’m alone.

A world that’s empty.

A world where you are no longer there.

 

I came from a world.

A world where I was surrounded by people.

A world where I was loved

A world where I was able to love you.

 

I’m in a world where every face I see,

Is nothing but a blur.

In a world where people talk,

But I cant hear.

In a world where nobody notices me,

Or hears my cry of pain.

 

It used to be a pleasure to be alive.

To have you touch me.

To feel the fire you left behind ,

when you where against my body.

To have your lips to my ear and tell,

“I love you”

“you’re my whole life”

 

Now you are gone,

Gone to the heavens.

And I stay hear,

In hell.

Oh how it hurts,

To be in a place,

I once loved,

Turn into nothing when you left.

 

Now my days are cold, Filled with tears.

Trying to survive.

To survive without you.

Why do I try?

If what I truly want is gone.

Why don’t I go with you?

And finally sop the pain.

 

When I can be, Be happy. Be loved.

Be With you.

Author's Note

tell me what you think.

Reviews

[fred...]

Cool

[Jess Cook]

How lovely and sad.

[lindsay]

i really enjoyed reading this. it was like reading a story in poem format.
you write beautifully=]

[EMP]

thanks for the review, it helped :)
i really like this poem, you create something really real and it's really effective.
keep up the good work :)

[Starting Over]

you have a lot of talent! very beautiful! i really enjoyed all your poems!

[lilfeather]

I really enjoyed the poem, you have talent, but I think you posted it twice.