I'll miss

I'll miss

A Poem by Tanya
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this poem is about a girl who falls in love with an man who she cant be with.. she thinks she isnt good enough therefore she thinks she cant be with him. the poem semi relates to me.

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I’ll miss

 

I miss his face that goes beyond recognition.

The perfect lines of his perfect skin,

Makes my own skin get Goosebumps.

 

I miss the sweetest scent of his breath,

That way that it makes my own mouth water.

In instants

takes my breath away.

 

I miss his words, his voice

that makes my eye’s,

My inside melt.

The way he makes my heart skip a beat with his meanings.

 

I miss his gentle hands glide over my imperfect body.

It makes me think of his every perfection

But the sweet touch and the loving feeling that he care.

Makes me think that I can’t be with him.

 

The way that he makes me happy,

Can only be nothing but a memory

 

For our love is nothing but an

Impossible.

© 2008 Tanya


Author's Note

Tanya
what do you think. i know it isnt perfect what do you think of the concept, the flow and the overall poem. honest reviews please.

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This is nice. i bet alot of people can relate to it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This poem is nice. Could be better.

Posted 15 Years Ago



Nicely done, though I did trip over the last word.

Good work...

Posted 15 Years Ago


i can also relate to this poam. very nice job. i lov it

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can so relate to this poem! Wanting to be with the one you cant have! Very true to me!!!

Loved it!



Posted 15 Years Ago


It could be better, but I really enjoyed it! you have talent, you just need to keep writing! I liked the concept, but the flow wasnt to good. Im sure you can inprove, your new! But, yes, it was, all in all, a good poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 11, 2008

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Tanya
Tanya

Bentonville, AR



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I'm not really into talking about myself, but I guess I should now. I love writing, really, it's the only thing that really defines me. I love poetry, but I love Prose more. There's more room to work .. more..

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