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A Poem by tanusri bhowmick

The star up there 
Among the sky
Is that where 
You went to hide

That is the star
Where you went
But is it that far 
That i will never see you anywhere 

I know your not here
But you will still be with me

You are very near
And therefore 
That star i can see

It does not matter 
You are dead 
Your presence with me will always be felt

© 2013 tanusri bhowmick


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I think you meant you are not here or you can not hear in line in line 10.its a good one though.i like people like you who are open to suggestions.keep up the,good work :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


tanusri bhowmick

10 Years Ago

thanku so much to point this out i did correct it
please read and sure tell me my mistakes

Posted 10 Years Ago



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nagpur, India



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