star

The star up there 

Among the sky

Is that where 

You went to hide

That is the star

Where you went

But is it that far 

That i will never see you anywhere 

I know your not here

But you will still be with me

You are very near

And therefore 

That star i can see

It does not matter 

You are dead 

Your presence with me will always be felt

Reviews

[Dominic Shaya]

I think you meant you are not here or you can not hear in line in line 10.its a good one though.i like people like you who are open to suggestions.keep up the,good work :-)

[tanusri bhowmick]

thanku so much to point this out i did correct it

[tanusri bhowmick]

please read and sure tell me my mistakes