Hell

its a long but simple tale....

 for those who walk through hell,

 stuck forever in a cell, a story they can never tell.

 you never know how long its been

 but will you realize all your sins.

 let them fall from every pour 

rot you from your very core. 

this isn't a warning just a fact

 keep your morals well in tact. 

because in the end it's all the same:

was it worth that bit of fame?

Reviews

[Luke Rawlings]

A good poem that speaks to the conspiracist in me. Just a note; it should be "pore" and not "pour" but a great poem. I enjoyed reading this :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Powerful life advice in this well written poem. Tough love! Lydi**