I will survive!

Man evolved and survived through difficult times from the beginning. Internal feelings though make us weak at times. Betrayal in love is one of kind but one should surive the onslaught and not care!

You left me alone under bright moonlight,

I was weeping and pleading whole night.

Do you think I will crumble and feelings forever will be warm?

I will survive without you, there is no harm.

Of all the love I had nurtured for you,

You didn’t care for a moment and I had no clue.

Is there no tomorrow or will I not be loved ever by anyone?

I will survive without you, you are not the one.

You made me feel like I am ‘Miss nobody’,

And break my heart to run away with somebody.

Do you think I will be withered and dead on the reddened shore?

I will survive without you, there is everything in you to ignore.

Last days of our love now feel like hell,

I had tolerated all abuse now it rings the bell.

Do you think I will be bewitched and feel so weak?

I will survive without you; I will rise to reach the peak.

Author's Note

I was just going through many of the poems on writerscafe and found a pice from one of my friend. It was a poem where a girl was heartbroken and trying to self destruct longing for death. Made me write this one as a reply and hope it inspires the girl to survive.

Reviews

[Diamond]

Stunning!! I admire the concept behind this poem. I am glad I read it. Yes, some relationships are like magic spell. And one needs to invest brains to take care of themselves. I loved these lines.

"Do you think I will be bewitched and feel so weak?
I will survive without you; I will rise to reach the peak."

[tanmay7551]

Thanks so much, I am glad that you liked it and the idea behind... Inspiring for me!

[Diamond]

You are welcome and keep writing.

[horizon]

This is absolutely stunning....you know what you said true in this writing...we aren't dependent on those who don't deserves our true love....that kind of people should be left and then we should do something that they would regret afterwards that what have they lost...was their biggest and worst mistake

[tanmay7551]

Thanks Dear Friend. True, we should do something to make them regret or sometimes doing nothing also makes an impact as other person keeps on waiting for reaction and we just don't give them what they expect from us.

[horizon]

yes...and that irritation on the face is just so nice....

[Nessly]

Empowering. Lovely poem. Thank you. :)

[tanmay7551]

Thanks Nessly for your review.

[Nessly]

You're welcome!