A Radiant Sun

work in progress ...just an idea..

 

Have you seen

     A time of  immense dearth?

Have you heard ?

     The silent scream & aggravation woven

             In the million voices of 

                           A vibrant decaying generation?

Have you widen your hands ?

            To the dark night’s  blissy shining stars ….?

Don’t u know ?

        If the stars disappear

                One by one ……..

             Then there will be nothing

                            But rambling darkness …. ?

      

Let there be enigmatic radiance …              

                 Let there be serene rain ….

                        Breaking the vicious

                                    circle of pain ....

                                         Let the new dawn commence ....

                                                       

                           Where a radiant Sun

                                    Will spread the light of

                                                           Hope, love

                                                                  And justice !

Reviews

[Titus McGuire]

I think what I like most about your works is after I have read them there is so much to think about. You have an idea in mind that you portray so cleverly in your piece, and it makes one take pause and stop and ponder the meaning and the idea. The fact that you use questions to open this piece immediately provokes the mind to thought, and the descriptions you use ('The silent scream & aggravation', 'A vibrant decaying generation', 'rambling darkness') expresses so much. The ending is truly positive, and a wonderful message to those who read this, and again you deliver such grand description as to make this piece not only entertaining, but to paint a scene that we as people need to see to fully understand just what this piece is about. 'Let there be enigmatic radiance', 'Let the new dawn commence', now that's a message for this generation and the generations to come. Perfectly written, and thought provoking as always. Bravissimi.

[Lyrical Love]

This is something special Big O!
It gave me a chill...
I can't wait to see the finished thought if this isn't it!
Let there be enigmatic radiance � love that!!!

[Everchanging Disaster]

This seems to be more than a work in progress to me-seems to be more like a complete work of art. Loved it such a harsh and yet eloquent way to express your point. Thanks for sharing!