Drizzle

 

Speeding drizzle! ....

            With your placid spray….

    Wash away …        

 

            The numbness,

                      The infidelities,

                             The devastations ….

                                The misplaced childhoods …

                                     The unrelenting morbidities ….       

 

Let each pearl drops of lucidity 

                  Aglow with sacred flames …

                              Temperate each isolation

                      Far and wide …..

                        

With the dawn’s prolific expectancy …

                      With the ecstasy of …

                                  A sanctified solidarity … !

 

Speeding drizzle! …

            With your placid spray….

     Wash away  …

Author's Note

This about global warming & impacts ...... homeless children
Also this is about global solidarity .......

Reviews

[Michael X]

This poem is heart touching and sculpted with vivid effect in imagery and
the form has a way of accentuating the terms that capture sentimental understanding
as well as an empathetic point of view on worldly conditions,
my heart goes out to the innocent who suffer through not fault of their own,
beautifully written and a pleasure to read, keep up the great work!

[Helena]

Excellent write my friend....you never cease to amaze me with the top class poetry you come up with every time.

This was so beautifully executed and the serious message was not lost but done in such a succinct and brilliant way.

Helena

[M Bester]

Very good, I love it, before I read your note, I thought you were talking about tears.
Amazing choice of words.

[Titus McGuire]

Very well written, I have to agree with Michael's review of this piece, he's stated most of what I would have stated myself. You did an exceptional job with this one. Bravi.

[Lyrical Love]

Kudos!!!
This is well written and quite thought provoking. I can hear it being bellowed out
in spoken word!!

[Helen Woodward]

You have placed the plight of the homeless in the limelight and I believe strongly that creating awareness is half the battle. I like your parallels of drizzle because it helps the reader identify with the cold that covers the homeless in a blanket of misery.
Well-done :-)

[Wildfleour]

Very poignant.

Well penned.