Seasons

 

 

 

Dreams fly ..

       Dreams die ..

 

Summer stain,

    Flooding rain,

          Spring’s Bliss,

               Winter Kiss,

 

You & me

       In our self defined prisons

           With hollow rhymes & stagnant reasons.

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

Nicely done, and I like the missing link.
You can't always be so predictable.

[Seriana]

VERY interesting. Huh....I'm with Titus on this, though. I think you should have mentioned autumn somehow.
I really, REALLY loved the last 2 lines. Ouch! But, it was briefly poignant. Nice job!

[Titus McGuire]

This was a good poem, though I felt autumn should have been mentioned. Still, I liked it.