Blackout

Based on a true story

The power went out

Before I got to save it

That's how I lost it

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

I second Rain's review. Also, it has a nice rhythmn to it, kind of bouncy - and there's almost imperfect rhyme going on, with the 'out', 'it', 'got' etc.
Nice work.

[Rain]

LOL..Short,consise and clever. I loved it. Rain..