I do!

I do!

A Poem by Tamme
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It's that butterflies in the stomach kinda thing

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I love you! 
    I do!
        I do!
            I do do do!

For a moment...
    I think I forgot to remember.
       How I love you!
          I do!
            I do!
                I do do do!

For awhile...
    Fear pushed you back.
       Now I am pulling you close.
          'Cause I love you!
               I do!
                   I do!
                        I do do do!

For just a bit...
    I lost my head.
       Your patience found it.
          And gave it back to me.
             And I love you!
                 I do!
                      I do!
                           I do do do!

For a instant...
    I was my tenacious self.
       Maybe a bit childish, too.
          You were right, I was wrong.
             It feels odd to utter those words.
                But I love you!
                   I do!
                      I do!
                         I do do do!

For eternity...
    You.
       Me.
          Here.
             Together.
                Like this.
                   Forever I love you!
                      I do!
                         I do!
                            I do do do!

© 2008 Tamme


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I am now a believer in the fact that you are in love. I like the style and the I Do's. Great read

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sweet piece.
Sandra♥

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is almost childlike, but I mean that in the best way possible. You've expressed such a happy, carefree love in this....it's like you just let go of everything and shouted out from the mountain tops that you're in love. It's filled with glee and confession and apology and acceptance and release....so much fun to read something happy. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would say your in Love:)

A wonderful way to show how you feel....:)

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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