what did you accomplish?

what did you accomplish?

A Poem by Tamluvstowrite

What did you accomplish?

By Tamyara Brown

You had your moment to hurt me again

But in the end you ended up being the victim.

You had an opportunity to see my tears by injecting fear.

It's okay because when it's all said and done.

I was in the right and you were wrong.

No matter what you do or say

I can never love you again.

Even though your words struck like lightning

It's cool because I'm still here.

How are you going to  get mad at me for not being your friend?

How could you disrespect me when I
Have said nothing to you at all?

What did you accomplish?

Another night of wet dreams of me 

Embarrass because you can't get "ex sex"

Or is it because you can only last a minute?

I mean you tell me?

Thought I would belittle myself

And act out

You don't know but my silence and walking away save your life.

You should have been on the floor cut but a

Real woman walks away.

Showing out just because your woman was there.

Real men never have to act because their very presence speaks for itself.

I'm stronger than that

I’m so much smarter

So much sweeter

You know you taste the berry juice

So again I ask what did you accomplish?

© 2008 Tamluvstowrite






© 2013 Tamluvstowrite


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Beyond a small ammount of time addressing the format of this work, and a little correction to some typographical errors, one could find little wrong with it. As a rail against the male of the species it serves as quite a serviceble work, with moments of phraseology that are frankly brilliant. I wish you well with it. It is an interesting read.

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Beyond a small ammount of time addressing the format of this work, and a little correction to some typographical errors, one could find little wrong with it. As a rail against the male of the species it serves as quite a serviceble work, with moments of phraseology that are frankly brilliant. I wish you well with it. It is an interesting read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am a mother of six beautiful children. Writing is my true passion. This is something I do even if I never receive one red cent for. I love expressing myself. I have a deep passion for leaving a me.. more..

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